I would have at least a paragraph or two to tell them about the event, or whatever the main newsletter topic is - just enought to get them excited about it, but not too much information, overoading the reader and possibly not reading the rest of the newsletter.

The following is text is for position only. Upon completion, you’ll be ready to face the state licensing examination and prepared for a rewarding career as a licensed cosmetologist, retail sales specialist, salon manager, or owner.

Mercedes Hilburg
Cosmetology

Mercedes has consistently lead the way in retail sales since she began services in April, 2005. I would mention more personal aspects of the featured FP, like start date, expected graduation date, where she’s from, hobbies, etc. I (and readers) want to get to know the person more.

Aids Walk 2005

Support our team in this year’s Aids Walk! As mentioned earlier, try to list some details about any promotion to get them more interested with a hopeful “click”. GMAI Future Professionals expect to raise $7,000 by Sept. 10th.